I went to bar at second times, but anybody didn't want to know how many time to me.
The important is John's show, but Who is John? Why do I introduce him?
I have a easy reason, because he is my teacher,and his song is very good.
Allow me to introduce John's song to everybody.
He is a teacher in te morning ,and he is a singer in the evening at the bar.
This is a John website http://www.myspace.com/actualrabbits
He's a very wide range of music styles, but usually rock and country mix together
I hope everybody like it.
If you find some mistakes,please tell me
Thanks
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1.but anybody didn't want to know how many time to me. 我看不懂這句的意思耶= = 2. a easy reason 是an 喔 3.in te morning 少打一個h 4.John website 感覺寫John's website 不錯耶 感覺有進步XD
Hello, you are still thinking in Chinese way. Please just try to write in English, don't translate anything from Chinese. Cheer up! 1. It was just my second time to go to a bar, but no one knows that. 2. The impotant (thing/ part to me) is John's show, but who is he? Why do I wanna introduce John? 3. Here comes a simple reason, he is my teacher (teach what?), and his songs are nice. 4. Let me introduce John's songs to you guys. 5. John is a teacher (of what?) in the morning, but at night time, he becomes a singer in the bar. 6. This is John's website./ This is the website of John. 7. The music style of John is diverse, but usually he mixes rock music with country music. 8. I hope everyone likes John's songs.
加油加油~~ 作文就是要多練習才會更好喔^^ 餃子我也要多加努力啦XD 已經放空好久的英文...>"<